Today was the first showing of our film everyone that watched it told us that they were confused by the narrative of our idea and felt some of the clips were irrelevant to the idea.
People said they were most confused about the walking and it's relevance to the idea, they also didn't like how slow paced it was, it was suggested that instead of having our character walk towards the deal for the whole sequence we shorten the walk and instead have clips of the production of the Drugs then being passed down to each other part of the line (maker>dealer>street dealer>buyer>consumption) we have taken this idea on board and plan to start filming clips for it on monday.
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