Review Day 3

Today we got a better review than we had ever before, we were told the idea is good and our title sequence is becoming more relevant to our idea and what we want it to show
Unfortunately at the moment our clip doesn't last long enough being 50 seconds we were recommended taking more pictures for the sequence and to begin focusing on music and where to position the title credits in our clip  

Review day 2

We had added the clips the the production but people began to say how it doesn't link to our films idea,

we spoke to the teacher about our idea and they showed us the Jesse drug dealing montage from Breaking Bad and informed us on that is what we should be heading for to achieve what we need to be showing in our title sequence.

Jesse meth montage:  http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VV4v4LjBEXQ

Review day 1

Today was the first showing of our film everyone that watched it told us that they were confused by the narrative of our idea and felt some of the clips were irrelevant to the idea.

People said they were most confused about the walking and it's relevance to the idea, they also didn't like how slow paced it was, it was suggested that instead of having our character walk towards the deal for the whole sequence we shorten the walk and instead have clips of the production of the Drugs then being passed down to each other part of the line (maker>dealer>street dealer>buyer>consumption) we have taken this idea on board and plan to start filming clips for it on monday.